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Kia Ora my name is Mele, and I am a year 8 student at Tautoro School. I just want to say how amazing this piece of writing is and how descriptive it is in your'e writing.What i really enjoy about this post is how you described yourself while doing army skills and drills. One thing that stood out to me was the fact that you stated how it gives you strength, how it gives you energy, how it teaches you discipline and how it teaches you respect. nothing in this post is negative so overall, ka pai! Anyways, blog you later
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